Improving practical work

Marking current film work

• Producing material appropriate for target audience and task (e.g. this should resemble a horror film opening with a specific audience in mind)

Grade 2(Mid)

• Using titles/credits appropriately and in line with professional conventions

Grade 1(Low)

• Using sound with images and editing appropriately for the task set

Grade 2(Mid)

• Controlled use of camera and attention to framing

Grade 2(Mid)

• Attention to mise en scene

Grade 2(Low)

• Variety of shot types (using apt shot sizes)

Grade 2(Low)

• Using editing so that meaning is appropriate to the viewer

Grade 2(Mid)

To improve our work my plan for improvement is to do more shot types, and observe whats on screen, for example where the bucket has been placed isn't visible when Emily's standing outside the door, and whether it fits between shots. In addition credits must be included and re-filming of some shots especially Emily's scene where you can see a laugh and characters need to be more fearsome and in slightly better costume, e.g. Junior's clothing in the shot.